My webcomic "journey through the starsea" is a short Scifi-Fantasy-Survival-Story (45 Pages+Cover ) about a man with a mysterious disease who is trying to find a cure by traveling through a bizarre universe full of dangerous threats.
It is a quick read!

Someday in the future I will release an edited version of this comic with story-,layout- and art-changes.
With the art and I am quite certain what I want to do differently next time but I am unsure about the story, perhaps you can focus your critique on the storytelling/ story, dialogue and characters?
But art-critique is appreciated as well!